When you look at the introduction of paper we have in slides you can say that is not very clear, they are mixed information, it looks like a report of what the Gorvement has done to improve health outcomes and strengthen health service delivery in Rwanda not like a good introduction of Scientific paper.
The Criteria 1: The description of the topic: is not well described it give a lot of information with the repetition,
The Criteria 2: Summary of existing knowledge well described in this paper,
The Criteria 3: Purpose of your study not well describe it looks like a report not like a purpose of the study,
The Criteria 4: Description of your study not clear.
The Criteria 5: Contextual information not started. Not mentioned in the Introduction
The Criteria 6: Potential impact not well described.