Good title:
- Title 1 “Serological analysis for the detection HeB in pregnant women in EAC: a comparison with culture background “ is a good title because:
- The words are not more than 20 words
- Participants are the pregnant women from EAC
- And compare them using to there culture background.
Bad titles
Title 2 and 3 are bad titles because:
- If a reader isn’t coming from Rwanda, they wouldn’t know where Musanze district and Bugesera districts are therefore the title wouldn’t attract them at first sight.
- Title 3 has a jargon:U5 which for someone not in the medical field isn’t easy to tell what it means.
- Title 5 “We should stop using formula milk to treat malnutrition in premature babies”
is the worst title because:
- it looks like a conclusion rather than a title.
- Also it doesn’t tell what type of study it is.
- Title 4 “Report of an assessment into poor hygiene behavior as a reason for the acquisition of diarrhea by some minority in living in slams in Kenya”
is also a bad title because:
-words are beyond the limit, they are 23 (beyond 20 words)
- But it provides outcome and participants of the study.