E-tivity 1.2

1. "Serological survey of toxoplasmosis in four rural communities in southern Africa"

• Bad Title
• Because:

- The word “ survey of…” which is useless in the good title - There is no participants précised in the Title and comparison as well - The word “ four” which is not recommended as specific geographic words

1. "We should stop using ampicillin and cotrimoxazole to treat shigellosis."

• Bad Title, Because: 

- It tends to be a conclusion instead of being a title - There are no participants précised in the Title -  No comparison

1. "Rapid emergence of in-vitro resistance to ampicillin and cotrimoxazole in Shigella dysenteriae type d from Musanze."

• Bad Title, Because: - Too specific where it mentions “ Musanze” - There are no participants précised in the Title

1. "Risk factors for typhoid in children in remote areas of  Vietnam"

• Good Title, Because: - It comprises topic and necessary criteria for a good title

1. "Report of an investigation into poor hygiene behaviour as  a reason for the acquisition of typhoid fever by some ethnic minority children in Vietnam"

• Bad Title, Because: - the Too specific where it mentions “ Some ethnic minority Children” - It is made of many words that demotivate